I like the composition and the color palette so far. Colorful pictures are cheering me up I didnīt realize this that much when I saw the lineart. There might have been more dynamics in the picture if the water-rainbow or a part of it was bending over the top of the frame and bend back over the right corner. Itīs already looking good, but maybe that wouldīve add some more speed to the picture. Suggestions about the texture of the water-rainbow? Do you have any water-like textures? I guess there will be a problem not to make the water look too much like wallpaint. So if the texture would make the water look a bit more transparent, maybe thatīll help? Iīm sorry for my bad english; hope you did at least get half of what I meant to say
Thanks for your thoughts. I ended up using a water color brush when working on the water to get a painted effect that I quite like. I didn't really want it transparent. As for the dynamics, since I was time crunching, at that moment there really wasn't much I could do to adjust without completely removing and reworking that area. It is something I will keep in mind for future works, though, and I appreciate you taking the time to let me know your opinion.
I didnīt realize this that much when I saw the lineart. There might have been more dynamics in the picture if the water-rainbow or a part of it was bending over the top of the frame and bend back over the right corner. Itīs already looking good, but maybe that wouldīve add some more speed to the picture.
Suggestions about the texture of the water-rainbow? Do you have any water-like textures? I guess there will be a problem not to make the water look too much like wallpaint. So if the texture would make the water look a bit more transparent, maybe thatīll help? Iīm sorry for my bad english; hope you did at least get half of what I meant to say